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Well, this is the first thing I do because someone asked me to do it. :D

A journal for =vulpixhelen who looooves vulpix pokemon =p


:star: Live version: [link]


:star: Works for:
:bulletpink: Mozilla Firefox 3.5
:bulletpink: Internet Explorer 7
:bulletpink: Opera 9



:star:Your codes

<*div class="title">Your Title<*/div>

<*div class="features">Your Thumbs<*/div>

(without the *'s)

:star: Many thanks to:

:iconbrgtt: for the Gruze template

:iconthespook: for the top menu for gruze

:iconginkgografix: for the tutorials


:star: Resources:

:bulletpink: Vulpix image [link]

:bulletpink: Brushes [link] By ~spiritsighs-stock

Critiques


:iconarex-kun11:
First thing I noticed is the giant vulpix. I love the stars hanging from the top that seem to glow... i really like the glowiness! The 'watch me', 'note me' etc. links seem to be at a sort of odd angle... I like the position of the title and the Features thing. I don't like how in this one you don't have something special around the comments/journal entries thing like in your other layouts.

Like
:star:Color
:star:Positioning of most things
:star:Graphics

Dislike
:star-empty: The placement of the links
:star-empty: The non-special comments and previous journal links
:star-empty:the red vulpix stands out a little too much
The Artist thought this was FAIR
15 out of 15 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconginkgografix:
And here we are again :D

It seems like you've found your own style regarding templates. Just by looking at the previews it is possible to recognize your creations now. That is very good, but on the other hand some more differences won't be wrong either. That's not really some kind of critique, but maybe try something new every now and then to give your works some variety. You know that these kind of layouts are working, now it is time to explore new layouts.

And i think that's the only thing that is less positive i can mention here.
The colors you have choosen work very well together. The highlights are matching perfectly. Adding that white area around the thumbs is a good way to lighten up that bold purple a bit and to avoid that there will be too much of one color.

It's well structure, clean and easy to navigate. So there is not much i can say here.
Maybe the title/date lines can be moved a little bit more to the right, to give them some more space to breath. The rest works fine as it is!

Nice work as always. :rose:

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:iconpica-ae:
you like those wave shapes, don't you? ;)
the feature part looks cool

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:iconharleshinn:
Oh I can't help it!! :eager:
I'm feel identified with curves (?)

Thank you :D

(no waves on february,I promise!! xD)

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:iconmoonfreak:
Looks great. :)

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:iconharleshinn:
Thanks :D

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:iconharleshinn:
I can change it for you and put whatever you want, because I never give my original files, but the answer would be: yes, I can change that fox for you =]

Soon I will start taking comissions, if you're interested =)

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:iconharleshinn:
Thank you so much :hug:

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:iconaurarinoa:
I think I can do it by myself! ^__^ But if you want I can give you the image!

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